As you may remember, a while back we had a Contest (which, if we do say so ourself, was the most amazing contest in the history of publishing, thanks to YOU!!). Contest winner Ulysses has posted his Prize, a critique of his query by our illustrious person, on his very thoughtful blog. We do not generally engage in query critiques, as there are people who are much better at it than we are to help you; but if you are curious as to what it might look like if we sharked you, go investigate.